Yet another Poem we did for creative writing,
An Apple is meant to be eaten, so
Positioned a knife and ready to slice, then
Peel it's skin, Oh what a sin, this
Lust to something so divine, and I
End it with a bite!
A.P.P.L.E
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kau makan epal gune pisau pulak??! maen gigit je aku tgk??!
ala, yg tu jugak ko nak komen, cube la puji poem aku best ke, apa ke, ke, ke
sensational! :)
Oo Aaapple, enak dicekik begitu sajaaa (cara sebutan = tema Gardenia)
wani, sensational menggetar jiwa raga? hihihi
arip, dicekik as in pakai tangan cekik? kikikiki
gluttony is a deadly sin!
haha :p
nice job, ramzi
thanks top, tapi ini bukan gluttony tau, ini betul2 last kat epal ni, ala2 fetish gitu, ops!
byk2 epal tu pun still kena dmam..
kata "an apple a day kees the dr away"..
get well soon..
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