Jumaat, 17 Julai 2009

I Need To Bite You

Oh pierce my eyes with your eternal blush!, devine is your scent as I glorify your existence, my finger grasp your perfect shape, Greed!, Forgive me for lust is strong as I cut your skin, my bites make you drip and I lick each drop for to waste you my dear is a sin unforgiven.
Referring to an apple. This is what we did in creative writing class this week.

4 ulasan:

aina berkata...

ramzi.this piece is realllly good!

Romzi berkata...

it was nothing lah aina, u should the one by my classmates, diorang lagi best

Cahaya Pejuang berkata...

wow! best2..
kami dulu pn wat psl apple gak..
mesti mdm yate bwk apple n orange g klas kan?kan?
hehe~

Romzi berkata...

hehe, betoi tu, mam suh pilih nak yang mane pastuh I terus jerit mintak apple, hehehe